Blog7

I chose my primary source from a Chinese blog which refers to Chinese current education. So I try to find more information about the education in China to prove the blogger's opinion. Also, I need to find the information about American education. I need to analyze my secondary source to support or oppose the opinions from primary source. And I should give my own ideas. But I did not understand well of the requirement for the essay. I did not integrate the primary source and secondary source. What's worse, I did not analyze the secondary source. I just put the sentence selected from secondary source in the SSI. I need to analyze these sentences. And I need to clarify what the secondary source imply. Then when I got the feedback of my SSI, I realized my mistakes. I revised my SSI according to the suggestion I got in my feedback. I also stated my own claims in the SSI. As English110 is a writing class for every student including the native speaker, it is more difficult than the English 108 or 107. And the writing rules are also different. Although my writing ability,compared to native speaker students, is so bad I still get an improvement in this class. Chase taught us a lot in the class and I also learned a lot from classmates' writing. I read everyone's blog in my group to learn the vocabulary and sentence structure. I hope I can write a high-quality essay one day.